Challenge: Write a #kidlit story inspired by one of the provided fall images in 200 words or less. I was a winner last year for my story CINDERFELLA.
This year’s entry is a young adult zombie love story written in senryū poetry. Senryū is similar to haiku in structure but focuses on human nature and emotions rather than nature. I love writing in this style. My piece was inspired by the photo below.
By Dana Marie Miroballi
YOUNG ADULT – 189 WORDS
Time to rise, my love Waning moon behind the clouds Flesh above the ground
Let me hold your gaze Dangling eye enrapturing Still the girl I loved
Please — remember me Thinking back to summers past Childhood memories
How could you forget Waiting felt like centuries Love that transcends life
Dance with me in death Decomposing dresses flow Gliding silhouettes
Wind — draw us closer Stroking remnants of your curls Auburn of my dreams
Come — embrace my bones Cherishing your fading face Barely lips to kiss
Never let me go Whispering my final words Promises to keep
Share eternity Dining nightly by our tombs Undead for all time
Stay — come back to me Departing for another Boy who died with you
Grant me one more waltz Circling around the graveyard Putrid hands entwined
Let you go I must Releasing my desires Silent hearts can break
Mend what I have left Dying twice is misery Fear of loneliness
Wander on my own Lamenting my misfortunes Anguished moans resound
Until — the fear dissipates Catching a new rotting eye Resurrected hope
Say your name once more Waxing moon enlivens smiles Love can be reborn
Thank you Vivian Kirkfield for hosting such a fun and CHALLENGING contest. I didn’t think I could write a story with a beginning, middle, and end in only 50 words, but I surprised myself. Check out all the entries here: 50 PRECIOUS WORDS 2021.
FRANKIE’S FIERY FART (50 words)
“Get in back, Frankie.”
Frankie frowned and fell out of formation.
“I can’t help that my fire comes out the wrong end.”
Suddenly, a giant eagle attacked.
Frankie flew back to the flock and scorched the eagle’s feathers with a fiery fart.
Hello there, writing friends! We’re at the start of a new year, so you know what that means: now is the time to tackle those writing goals with all the optimism you can muster.
Not feeling very inspired? It happens to the best of us. Don’t have a lot of time to commit to writing and need to be able to write on command? Well, that probably applies to many of us. What can you do? Stop waiting for inspiration to come to you and go get it.
Whenever I need to generate ideas, I rely on feelings. No, this doesn’t mean that I only write when I’m feeling good. It doesn’t even mean that I write sad characters when I’m feeling sad. I consider the wide range of feelings and emotions that are out there and pair them with different scenarios.
Ten years ago, I skirted the shadows of Tara’s 2011 PiBoIdMo (now Storystorm) Challenge. I walked away with a notebook filled with 30 ideas and a thirst for more. Two months later, I hopped aboard the first year of Julie Hedlund’s 12×12 Picture Book Challenge and wrote 12 picture book manuscripts. I got in the habit of gathering ideas from wherever they came and turning them into picture book stories. And that habit came in handy in the fall of 2017. I sold a manuscript to Ann Rider at HMH and she didn’t want just that manuscript—she wanted NINE! She wanted to create a compilation book about inventions that changed the way the world moves. My deadline was May 1, 2018—which gave me nine months to hand in nine submission-ready narrative nonfiction picture book biographies.
The idea for the first story actually came from my sister who…
2020 was full of unprecedented challenges. Julie Hedlundand the participants of Julie’s 12 Days of Christmas for Writersseries inspired me to post my writing SUCCESSES from 2020. New Year’s Resolutions typically come from a place of wishful thinking about how the previous year could have been better. Especially in the time of COVID, it’s important to reflect on the positives and create goals based on our achievements from the previous year. Here’s my list!
At age 40 and in the time of COVID, I’m finally starting to see myself as a real writer. I’ve written for myself, school, and work for years. Now I’m ready to work on my craft and prepare to release my stories to the world.
I discovered how AMAZING the Twitter kidlit writing community is. I’ve connected with more writers and illustrators than I could have imagined. The resources, events, contests, and support are so inspiring.
I’ve started participating in workshops, courses, critique groups, writing organizations, challenges, and contests.
Two of my stories won holiday writing contests. What?!
You’re just in time for some high jinx and shenanigans!
I’m always on the lookout for those fun holiday quizzes, but let’s face it: we’ve done Elf Names, and Reindeer Names, and that pretty much covers the available options. Last year I made up a What Kind of Christmas Cookie are you quiz. . . which was entertaining. . . but now we’ve done that too.
So this year I’ve decided to combine holiday quiz tomfoolery with writing prompt/idea generation! Try out this one!
I will not even try to deny that some of these combinations work better than others 😊 But I don’t mind if you cheat a little and use the first letter of your middle or last name or the month your pet iguana was born to get a better result 😊
My Holiday Picture Book Title is The Littlest Cookie…
I’m so glad that Susanna Hill’s 10th Annual Holiday Contest gave me the boost to finish a story that’s been simmering for awhile. The Contest: Write a children’s holiday story about a Holiday Helper in 250 words or less.
Wanda looked out the window. It was Halloween, but there wasn’t a skeleton in sight, just Santas and strings of colorful lights. “Christmas season starts earlier every year,”Wanda grumbled. “But this time they’ve gone too far.”
For the next 55 days, Wanda planned and plotted and prepared a spell to ruin Christmas.
On Christmas morning, Wanda took a candy cane and waved her wand. “Halloween was skipped, and so I’m vexed. Give me a monster that runs, roars, and wrecks.”
Wanda clapped as a Christmasurus appeared. “Come with me and help,” she cackled.
But when the Christmasaurus ran through town, everyone smiled.
“You’re fast,” a child said. “Please pull our sled.” The Christmasaurus was happy to help.
Wanda grumbled and waved her wand. Needs to be louder.
But when the Christmasaurus roared, everyone cheered. “Your voice is the perfect pitch,” a caroler said. “Please sing with us.” The Christmasaurus was happy to help.
Wanda grumbled and waved her wand again. Needs to be bigger.
But when the Christmasaurus went to wreck the tree, everyone looked relieved. “You’re just the right height,” the mayor said. “Please put the star on top.” The Christmasaurus was happy to help.
Wanda flew home fuming.
The Christmasaurus followed with a note from the mayor.
“Dear Wanda,” it read. “Thank you for the holiday helper. I hope to see you both at the Christmas party. P.S. Sorry we missed Halloween.”
Wanda grinned. “Why not?” she said. “I do like parties.”
My friend and critique partner, Maryna Doughty, has begun a new blog series called Thursday Read-Throughs. This week I’m excited to join her!
Picture books are meant to be read aloud, so it’s important for authors to hear their work read aloud. A recording of a first-time read-through can give a writer insights into the flow of the story, as well as any spots new readers may stumble.
I’ve always loved reading aloud. When I taught elementary school for ten years, my favorite part of the day was shared reading. Now I read aloud to my own little ones multiple times a day, as well as reading the stories of my critique partners.
I’m very excited to enter Susanna Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie contest this year. I’ve been loving writing challenges lately. Thank you Susanna Hill for organizing this competition. Read more about Halloweensie here: https://susannahill.com/blog/
I really like how my story turned out. Limiting to 100 words was a challenge, but that’s good practice. A lot of great recent picture books are low on word count. I watched a wonderful 12X12 workshop called Mine the Gaps with Hannah Barnaby recently where she discusses the importance of allowing room for the illustrator. Let me know how you think I did.
TRICK OR TROLL
One Halloween, after eating all their candy and the wrappers too, three billy goats decided to cross a troll bridge for more.
“Our skeleton costumes will scare that troll,” said the two eldest.
“Boo!” The troll ran under the bridge.
But the youngest didn’t like being scary. “I’ll just creep across quietly.”
He tried to slink. He tried to crawl. He tried trotting on tiptoe. But the troll heard him every time.
“Wait!” he thought. “Everyone likes candy.”
“Want to come too?” he asked. “You don’t even need a mask.”
“Yes!” the troll replied. And they crossed the bridge together.